Beyoned the magical door

In room 4 we did writing about doors. My buddy Maiah and I set the scene in our story. We had to make sure we hooked the reader in.  This is our story.

Let me tell you a story about what happened on a windy afternoon to a little girl called Allamaia. She was going on a Sunday stroll through the Unbelievable woods that had many mysteries. All of a sudden there was a bright light smack bang in front of her and she jumped back in surprise.  Allamaia took a deep breath and stepped forward and saw what was in front of her, a door. The door had brown patterns and was made out of wood. It was just standing there by itself just like magic. There was a fairy floating on the top right hand corner and there were fairy flowers all over the ground. She stood by the door and gave it a nudge,the door opened. Ahhh Allamaia screamed as she fell in………